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    Request for proof reading

    I've been working on an Antivirus Primer for my website and I just put a version of it up now. I was wondering if you could take a look at it when you have a free moment and let me know if you see any glaring errors, omissions, or suggestions.

    Thanks!

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    I do too
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    Yeah.. I do to at the moment.
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    Hylander has Technical problems, with his technical Problems.


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    Bite me yoga boy!

    Actually, I had them add Darkcyte.net and Darkcyte.com as domain pointers and they did a 'boo boo' on my account.

    It's fixed now BTW... Thanks.
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    Now I'm getting a "server not found".

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    the link is working now. unfortunatelly, i must go to bed. I'll read it tomarrow. good luck
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    nit picky boy here...

    coopted is actually "co-opted" otherwise it gets pronounced like in chicken coop.

    6th section from bottom...first word "additionally" misspelt as "additonally" ('i' is missing)

    Info on SP2...uh..ahem..uh..okay...LOL...I'm scared senseless of the thing..and not because of the press....LOL!!!

    I would like to admit that I looked at the article and posted this message using IE...switching to Firefox in
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    Quote Originally Posted by [AK]StitchJones
    Hylander has Technical problems, with his technical Problems.
    REPEAT
    Hylander has Technical problems, with his technical Problems.


    LOL!


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    Quote Originally Posted by [AK?]The Purchaser
    nit picky boy here...

    coopted is actually "co-opted" otherwise it gets pronounced like in chicken coop.

    6th section from bottom...first word "additionally" misspelt as "additonally" ('i' is missing)

    Info on SP2...uh..ahem..uh..okay...LOL...I'm scared senseless of the thing..and not because of the press....LOL!!!

    I would like to admit that I looked at the article and posted this message using IE...switching to Firefox in
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    Thanks for the proofing! I wrote it, and the limited code on the page, in notepad without spellcheck - which is apparent. Just did it in Dreamweaver to check a few things and made the corrections.
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    Just a quick read through:

    You used a capitol M in Malware earlier; maintain consistancy
    The main thing to understand about protecting yourself from malware is that most viruses and many worms cannot spread unless you open the door for them to do so.

    Anti-Virus or or antivirus. Pick one and stick with it.
    ...not is to update your Antivirus software with the most current virus definitions

    set your anti-virus software to scan all incoming email as it is being downloaded



    No comma after "cable"
    If you computer is connected to a network, unplug the Ethernet cable, or disable your wireless access

    Leave "Virus" lower case to be consistent
    Run your Virus checking software and remove any detected viruses.

    Use 3 periods here
    Internet Exploder.. pardon me, Explorer.

    Chances 'are' not 'is'
    The chances of you having significant problems, in my opinion, is a bit exaggerated

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    Nuts is WAAAAAY worse than me! (or is that 'I'????) LMAO!!!!

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    I finally got a chance to read it this afternoon, but I didn't see anything jump out at me that hasn't already been covered by Nuts and Purch.

    Great reference, BTW. I've already got your site linked from my blog, but I'll be giving it a plug over the weekend.

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    Quote Originally Posted by [AK]Nuts
    Just a quick read through:

    You used a capitol M in Malware earlier; maintain consistancy
    The main thing to understand about protecting yourself from malware is that most viruses and many worms cannot spread unless you open the door for them to do so.

    Anti-Virus or or antivirus. Pick one and stick with it.
    ...not is to update your Antivirus software with the most current virus definitions

    set your anti-virus software to scan all incoming email as it is being downloaded



    No comma after "cable"
    If you computer is connected to a network, unplug the Ethernet cable, or disable your wireless access

    Leave "Virus" lower case to be consistent
    Run your Virus checking software and remove any detected viruses.

    Use 3 periods here
    Internet Exploder.. pardon me, Explorer.

    Chances 'are' not 'is'
    The chances of you having significant problems, in my opinion, is a bit exaggerated

    I'm going to go redo it with crayon font.
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